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TEOTS(revised) - THE PREPARATION
THE EXPERIMENTS OF TWILIGHT SPARKLE (revised version)
This is my first MLP FIM fanfic I have started writing. I wrote this for shock value.
This was in NO WAY inspired by the MLP FIM episode “Lesson Zero,” as I got the idea for this fanfiction before it even aired. I found inspiration from several sources. A big inspiration came from the episode “Feeling Pinkie keen,” in the scene where Twilight Sparkle had Pinkie Pie hooked up to some machinery in her lab, to try to document her “Pinkie senses.”
Other, lesser inspirations came from “Conker’s bad fur day” & “Salad Fingers.”
WARNING! This fanfic contains long boring science lectures. And, oh yeah, it’s gory, dark, and disturbing. Reader’s discretion is advised.
Like how many stories begin, it was a nice, sunny day in Ponyville. But this was no ordinary day in Ponyville. This was the day before the
five hour energyi suppose
last week was only an aftershock
of the earthquake you were before.
this place used to vibrate
with metal strings and melodic,
testimonies to life,
emitting coffee-scented moods
and the burn of it too.
i had memorized the
sounds of silence,
i couldn't help but relish it.
no longer had i known
the sounds of folk
and scent of mocha-
you became nothing more
than an echo of the laughter
i so desperately needed to hear again.
then the echoes got louder,
bouncing ferociously off the walls
to be made manifest
i walked into your room
expecting exactly what i found-
an unmade bed,
and an empty beer
(the one that you insisted you needed
just days ago).
i pressed my nose
into the pillow
for incense and cologne and starbucks
to penetrate my mind
and thinking fervently
i already know
what a clean sheet smells like."
how strong an aftershock can be,
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